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In My Eyes
by Reko, 19, male

April 30, 2010

Dear Diary,

The sun was on the rooftop
the bird was in the cage
the pen would not stop
writing words on the page
and in my eyes was the rage.

The man was in the meadow
the bird was in the air
My world was full of shadow
My words were in despair
and in my eyes was a tear.

The cat lay in the sun
the bird flew through the rain
the pen became a gun
my words were words of pain
and in my eyes you were again.

The gun was there to kill it
the bird was in his aim
My words could not fill it
this empty shell of shame
It was freedom or the bullet
and the pen wrote your name
and in my eyes it was the same.

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I really enjoyed your poem.
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we are not updating because we have massive diarrhea.
deepee staff

I'll moderate part time for $15/hr, if that's the problem. I won't do it for free because I'm a capitalist bastard. Actually, I would do it for free, just so I can put all my entries first with every update. Also because I'm a bastard.
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Reko

nice !
Tae

so does anyone know why they're not updating?
zeli meli

good expression
anbin

I take it this poem was so brilliant that DP decided there is no need to ever update again.
black rabbit

hey you ;)
SavesTheDay

beautiful
Ken

That was one of the best poems that I have ever read. Amazing.
HardAsRocks

WELL DONE! One of the better poems I've read in a while.
Scientia,Potestas

:)
freak

Enjoyed this! Nice work..
Pi

not bad
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